I really liked the entrance and exit of the clouds for the emotion peace. The sounds you had described the emotion well. My favorite part was the action of the bumblebee on the flower. Good work!
I feel like your imagery was very evocative of the concept of peace, however, the sound was a bit distracting. Perhaps if you replaced the sound with a prerecorded ambient sound.
I thought that it showed the emotion of peace really well. I liked how you used different aspects of nature and manmade things to show the emotion of peace.
I really enjoyed the shot of the butterfly but the shot of the bee, i didn't personally like. Bees are one of my biggest fears. The words on the statute that said something about peace worked well with your project.
I like the perspective you took on peace - a patriotic perspective. Part of the audio was a little distracting; the repetitive loud buzzing noise. Good job!
The shots with nature were very peaceful and the transitions were smooth and calming. However the background noise was rather distracting. And I got a sense of sorrow or longing from the grave scenes. Choosing the graves wasn't necessarily a bad thing, different people find different things peaceful. The most jarring scene was when the flag shot cut in and there was the loud wind noise.
You have some good movement in here and a few bad ones as we talked about in class. Overall you did a great job conveying peacefulness. I could see it in your shot choices, your edits and transitions. You had a good concept for the sound design but it could have been executed with a bit more finesse.
I felt the most peaceful with the clip of the butterfly. Great video!
ReplyDeleteA lot of great shots in this video. Really showed the Peace emotion.
ReplyDeleteI loved the colors and the sounds of nature. It was very peaceful.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the entrance and exit of the clouds for the emotion peace. The sounds you had described the emotion well. My favorite part was the action of the bumblebee on the flower. Good work!
ReplyDeleteI liked your transitions and that you used the sound of nature as your background noise. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI feel like your imagery was very evocative of the concept of peace, however, the sound was a bit distracting. Perhaps if you replaced the sound with a prerecorded ambient sound.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your shot at the end of the flag and the let there be peace sign, nice job.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the last shot of the statue that had the word 'peace' on it. I felt it rounded out the video very nicely!
ReplyDeleteI thought that it showed the emotion of peace really well. I liked how you used different aspects of nature and manmade things to show the emotion of peace.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the shot of the butterfly but the shot of the bee, i didn't personally like. Bees are one of my biggest fears. The words on the statute that said something about peace worked well with your project.
ReplyDeleteI like the perspective you took on peace - a patriotic perspective. Part of the audio was a little distracting; the repetitive loud buzzing noise. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the shots you chose. Particularly the shots of the bronze statues that compliment your emotion choice of peace with the idea of safety.
ReplyDeleteThe shots with nature were very peaceful and the transitions were smooth and calming. However the background noise was rather distracting. And I got a sense of sorrow or longing from the grave scenes. Choosing the graves wasn't necessarily a bad thing, different people find different things peaceful. The most jarring scene was when the flag shot cut in and there was the loud wind noise.
ReplyDeleteYou have some good movement in here and a few bad ones as we talked about in class. Overall you did a great job conveying peacefulness. I could see it in your shot choices, your edits and transitions. You had a good concept for the sound design but it could have been executed with a bit more finesse.
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